Ielts speaking--how to improve your bandscore

Part 2
Describe a well-known person.
You should say the following:
1.  Who he/she is
2.  What makes him/her famous
3.  Why you admire him/her
Answer
I consider Jesus Christ to be a popular person, and I believe that his popularity is
limitless. This means that people from different walks of life, whether believers
or nonbelievers of Christianity, know him. He was known for his healing powers
and miraculous acts such as that of letting the blind see, the lame walk, and the
like. But the well-remembered event that made him famous was his death
through crucifixion. This is even commemorated yearly by the Christian world. I
have not had a face-to-face meeting with him, but through my readings, I’ve
learned that his love is unconditional—a reason why I admire him.