22. Don’t use the word “thing” to name the object or action you're writing
about. For example, instead of writing “when students go abroad, they have opportunities to experience many different things ”, you should write “when students go abroad, they have opportunities to experience many different things , such as new cultures and make new friends ”. That’s ok, because you
are giving two specific examples about what things you are talking about.
Review this list. When you’ve done with your first essay, go through the list
to make sure you are not making some of these mistakes.
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THE LIST OF IMPERSONAL OPINION ·
It cannot be denied that:
It cannot be denied that money plays an important role in people’s lives. ·
It is often claimed:
It is often claimed that money cannot buy happiness. ·
People often claim that:
People often claim that children cannot grow up perfectly without a parental present. ·
Some people argue that:
Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. ·
Many argue that:
Many argue that old workers should be permitted to work even after reaching the retirement age. ·
It is true to say that:
It is true to say that the global warming is caused by pollution and other environmental damage. ·
It is undeniable:
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