Cambridge University Press
978-1-316-64011-1 — Mindset for IELTS Level 1 Teacher's Book with Class Audio
Claire Wijayatilake
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Sample answer
The pictures show the stages in the production of
cherry jam. There are a number of processes involved,
from picking the fruit from the tree to putting it into
jars ready to sell.
First, a sheet is spread on
the ground under the tree
and the tree is shaken by a mechanical arm to get the
cherries down from the tree. Then, the cherries are
collected and transported by lorry to the processing
plant. There the leaves and the stems are removed and
then the stone is taken out with a metal spike. Next,
sugar, lemon juice and pectin are added to the cherries
and the jam is cooked. Ater that,
the quality of the jam
is checked and then the jam is put into jars. A lid is put
on top of the jars to keep the jam fresh. Finally, a label
is added and the jam is ready to be sold in the shops.
Feedback
When marking essays, do so positively. Tick the introduction
and overview as well as examples of sequencing linkers and
passive forms. Use a diferent colour to underline errors. Use
a correction code to encourage students
to correct their own
errors rather than making the correction for them, e.g.:
Sp-spelling
Gr- grammar
T-tense
P-punctuation
L-linking
Provide a positive comment at the end as well as a
suggestion for how the student can improve, e.g.
‘Good use of linkers but check your passive forms’.
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