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First body paragraph could be written either in One-Idea paragraph or Multiple-idea



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LESSON 5 Main

 
First body paragraph could be written either in One-Idea paragraph or Multiple-idea 
Paragraph. This is entirely derived from your thesis and outline statement. 
 


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I think this trend could be profitable only if the young disregard the negative and focus on the 
positive aspects of sports stars’ lives.
 
Ronaldo, a world-class central forward, for example, is 
infamous for his extreme individualism, but is still a role model of diligence and determination for 
all the efforts he has exerted in football training.
 
Many adolescents who are Ronaldo’s fans have 
overlooked his undesirable personal traits and trained themselves hard to achieve extraordinary 
results in their lives. In this way, the young may still benefit from sports stars' valuable life lessons. 
 
Body Paragraph 2: Chosen side (Two or more supporting ideas should be given to illustrate that 
your opinion has more ideas than opposing side) 
Second body paragraph is mainly written in a Multiple-Idea paragraph. 
 
On the other hand, idolising celebrities who are not excellent role models could result in negative 
effects.
 
One reason for this view is that young adults tend to spend a lot of time following what their 
idols do or where they would go. This may distract them from studying at school and they could a 
bad academic results.
 
Furthermore, young adults who are not mature enough to judge what is 
suitable and proper within society , they may copy their idols’ bad behaviors such as smoking
drinking alcohol or even drugs, resulting in spoil young people’s health and future life. 

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