Describe an artist or entertainer you admire.
You should say the following:
Who they are and what they do
How they became successful
How
you found out about them
Why you admire them
Style 1
I like two of the famous singers in my country, and they are internationally
recognized. They came from very humble beginnings.
Their talents were discovered in two different singing competitions sponsored by
one of the leading TV stations in our country.
One of their performances was featured on YouTube, which eventually attracted
many viewers. Afterwards, they were interviewed by famous TV personalities like
Oprah Winfrey and Ellen Degeneres.
A series of international concerts were then staged, and they were invited as
guests by famous singers, like Celine Dion and others.
I have actually watched their performances from the time they joined the singing
competitions. From that time on, I began to love their music.
I am one of their fans because they bring honour to my race and they remind me
of a lesson in life that dreams do come true.
The first style of making notes is time-consuming and very hard to accomplish
only within the given minute.
However, many IELTS candidates adopt this because
they just read what they
have written, but there is still a risk of sounding unnatural.
Style 2
Charice Pempengco—known internationally; Arnel Pineda—lead vocalist
of band Journey;
powerful voices
singers
international exposure / concerts / Youtube
Interviews by TV personalities like Oprah and Ellen Degeneres
TV shows, singing competitions
bring honor to my country / represent common people /
dreams do come
true
Style 3
Who?
Charice Pempengco (international singer); Arnel Pineda (lead vocalist of
band Journey)
How (succeed)?
International exposure / concerts / YouTube videos
interviews by known TV personalities (Oprah Winfrey and Ellen
Degeneres)
How (I know)?
singing
competition on TV; first media exposure
Why (I admire)?
because represent common people / dreams do come true / bring honor to
my race
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