DILSHODBEK RAVSHANOV 9 4.
Correct Tense Usage : The essay predominantly uses the present simple tense to discuss
general situations, showing consistent mastery over tense usage.
5.
Conditional and Comparative Structures : The essay uses these structures effectively, as in
"if they fail to integrate smoothly" and "may be much easier than people expect", to weigh
situations and consider hypothetical scenarios.
Tone of the essay is often underrated in IELTS writing, and the following paragraphs explain how
different tones were used in five essays to help the flow and presentation of arguments.
1. Essay on Climate Change ⤵️
Tone : Concerned and authoritative
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Explanation : The essay opens with a note about climate change being "arguably the most
alarming problem in the world," indicating a deep concern for the issue. The language used, such
as "ignoring," "potential problem," and "may result," portrays a sense of urgency. There's also a
confidence in the assertions made, showcasing the writer's authority on the topic. Words like
"detrimental consequences" further emphasize the gravity of the situation.
2. Essay on Late Childbearing ⤵️
Tone : Analytical and balanced
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Explanation : The essay evaluates both the reasons for the trend and its implications, positive and
negative. Phrases such as "I believe," "can explain," and "I think" indicate that the writer is
weighing the evidence and presenting a balanced view. There's an openness to consider both
sides of the argument while still establishing a clear personal stance.
3. Essay on Care Homes ⤵️
Tone : Reflective and empathetic
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Explanation : The essay acknowledges the benefits of nursing homes but also deeply considers
the emotional aspects of the elderly. Words and phrases such as "may not feel comfortable,"
"isolation and loneliness," and "not morally appropriate" show a strong empathetic understanding
of the elderly's feelings. The writer is introspective, weighing the pros and cons of the issue and
reflecting on societal and cultural nuances.
