The easy way to ielts writing academic Module

This sample essay achieves a high band score as it fully addresses the questions, fulfills remarkable
coherence (organization of paragraphs), cohesion (linking ideas) throughout, and uses a wide range
of sentence structures, advanced topic-related vocabulary, and collocations flexibly and
appropriately to meet the requirements for high band scores concerning vocabulary and grammar.
(Linking words and other cohesive devices are underlined in this sample essay.)
In the following sample writing, I will describe how to create a three-body-paragraph essay in which the first two
paragraphs deal with advantage(s) and disadvantage(s), while the third one focuses on the writer’s opinion. Bear in
mind that, although it is a possible way of structuring an essay, it might be more time consuming than formatting a
two-body-paragraph essay.
Topic #9
Modern agricultural methods have replaced traditional ways of farming in most countries.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this modernity and give your own opinion.

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Advantages of modern agriculture
1. Feeding the ever-growing human population
2. Increasing the variety of crops all year round everywhere
Disadvantages of modern agriculture
1. Substantial environmental pollution
2. Producing unhealthy foods
Explanatory sample writing
Introduction
Step 1: Paraphrase the topic
(Keep in mind that this is to avoid repetition.)
Today’s methods of farming have taken over conventional cultivation techniques in many areas.
Step 2: Thesis statement
(Outline both advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion implying the essay’s
content.)
Although these modern farming techniques have substantial negative impacts on the environment, they