The easy way to ielts writing academic Module


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For instance, equipped hospitals and healthcare centers are scarce in small towns, and in case of
emergencies and road accidents, casualties need to be transferred to the nearest big city for medical
examinations or surgeries; this could result in delayed recovery, permanent physiological injuries, or death
in unfortunate occasions.
Second body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(Mention the main effects of the situation in a simple sentence.)
Traffic congestion and air pollution are known to be the most adverse effects of overpopulation.
Step 2: Explanation
(Explain both effects in 2-4 sentences focusing on cause-effect language.)
Overcrowded subways and roads during rush hours are the unavoidable results of living in overpopulated
urban areas. Consequently, people end up wasting considerable amounts of time commuting daily.
Furthermore, exhaust fumes raise carbon dioxide levels in the air, generating air pollution, which
significantly affects the public’s health. Besides, overpopulation gives rise to crime rates.
Step 3: Example
(Give an example to support the paragraph; here, I made use of an example to describe the
second main effect as it was not explained in depth.)
An example of this is juvenile delinquency, a common situation in megacities among youngsters, who might
lack parental supervision as parents are likely to be fully occupied, making ends meet living a highly
competitive lifestyle.
(Keep in mind that there is no need to provide an example for every cause or every effect. In this paragraph, I
provided an example to support the second cause, which was not fully extended.)
Conclusion
Step 1: Summarize causes and effects
(Develop a complex sentence to summarize causes and effects. Note that
giving your personal opinion is not asked for in this topic.)

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