Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school 
subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that arts-related subjects are as important as other 
school subjects, especially for primary school children. I totally agree with 
this statement because this can help children to discover their talents from 
an early age and can increase their confidence.
One of the reasons I agree that creative subjects have the same 
importance as other school courses in primary school is that it allows 

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students to find out their potential talents early on. That is to say, school-
age is the most convenient time for students to learn more about their 
interests by trying different activities as they are young enough to pursue 
their hobbies. They will probably not have any other chance later in their 
lives to discover that because they will be busy with difficult exams when 
they get older. For example, most famous singers were discovered by their 
music teachers at school from a young age, and they claimed that they 
could not be that successful if their teachers did not find out their talents 
when they were young. 
Moreover, music, art and drama subjects help students to boost their 
confidence. That is because creative lessons teach students how to 
perform in front of lots of people and give them a chance to socialise with 
other students. As a result, students can realise their real potential and act 
more confidently. For instance, many psychologists suggest to students 
who are struggling with social anxiety to take drama lessons as it helps to 
enhance confidence.
In conclusion, this essay completely agrees that music, art and drama have 
the same value as other subjects in primary school because it allows 
children to discover their hidden talents early on and increases their self-
confidence.