17 Green Close Birmingham GN 55 7TY 15 th November 2014 2) In which paragraph (a-c) does Mark 1. describe what happened? ____ 2. say what he wants the company to do? ____ 3. explain why he is writing the letter? ____ 3) Answer the questions. 1. What is the full name of the person who wrote the letter? __________________________________ 2. What thing (item) is he complaining about? _____________________________________________ 3. When did he buy this thing? __________________________________________________________ 4. What is the problem with it? __________________________________________________________ 5. What is the customer enclosing with his letter? ___________________________________________ Writing Strategy 1) Write your address, add the date in full. 2) Start with Dear Sir or Madam, and finish with Yours faithfully or start with Dear Mr./Ms X… , and finish with Yours sincerely 3) Use expressions common for formal letters such as: I am writing to complain about… I would appreciate it if you could… I am writing to express my concern about the fact that… I am returning… with this letter. I am writing ….
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(a) I am writing to complain about a mobile phone that I bought from your shop in Broad Street last week. (b) Although the quality is excellent, the instructions on the screen are in Chinese and I can’t understand them. (c) I am returning the mobile phone with this letter. I would be grateful if you could repair the fault or replace the mobile phone. I look forward to hearing from you. 5
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4) Read the letter of complaint and complete the gaps by putting the words in 1-10 into the correct order. 1. Madam / Sir / Dear / or 6. food / problem / the / another / was 2. complain / am / about / to / I / writing 7. brochure / that / your / stated 3. reference / the / for / booking 8. like / refund / therefore / a partial 4. absence / desk / lengthy / from / reception / the 9. very / would / I / if / grateful / be 5. for / we / although / this / extra / paid 10. to / hearing / look / I / forward
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1. I’m really upset about my new mobile phone. ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 2. Please, phone me as soon as possible. ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 3. Here’s the receipt for you to look at. ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 19 Water Street Manchester N22 3BE 5 th September 2015 Customer Services Department Paradise Holidays Manchester K35 8FR 1______________________, 2_____________________________ a holiday I recently went on with Paradise Holidays. My family and I spent two weeks from 14 th August 2015 at the Calton Hotel in Navellia; 3_________________ __________ our holiday is BN77123. First of all, on our arrival, there was nobody to greet us and when, after a 15 minute wait, we finally booked in, the girl was sullen and unhelpful and made no apology for her 4______________________________________________________. My second complaint concerns the room we had. It was very dirty and did not have a sea view, 5________________________________ when we booked the holiday. When we tried to explain this to the receptionist, she was extremely rude and refused to change our room. To make matters worse, 6_________________________. They served the same dishes every mealtime and the portions were very small, so we never felt full. Finally, I should like to draw your attention to the evening entertainment which was a further disappointment. 7__________________________ the hotel offered a wide range of entertainment, but in fact there was just one singer with a terrible voice, who sang the same songs every night. All this has spoilt what should have been a wonderful holiday, and I would 8__________________________________ I suggest fifty per cent of the cost of the holiday. 9____________________________________________you could do it. 10 ________________________ from you. Yours faithfully, Samuel Morrison
Samuel Morrison 6)Write a letter of complaint to a shop. Dear ________ or _________ I am writing to_______________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ I am returning _______________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ I look forward ________________________________ Yours ____________________ iSLCollective.com
KEY Ex. 1) 1. 17 Green Close 2. 15 th November 2014 3. Lee Electronics Birmingham 35c Broad Street GN55 7 TY Birmingham 4. Dear Sir or Madam 5. Yours faithfully 6. Mark Brown Ex. 2) 1. b 2. c 3. a Ex. 3) Students’ own answers Ex. 4) 1. Dear Sir or Madam 2. I am writing to complain about 3. the booking reference for 4. lengthy absence from the reception desk 5. although we paid extra for this 6. the food was another problem / another problem was the food 7. Your brochure stated that 8. therefore like a partial refund 9. I would be very grateful if 10. I look forward to hearing Ex. 5) 1. I am writing to complain about my new mobile phone. 2. I would be grateful if you could phone me as soon as possible. 3. I am enclosing the receipt for your reference. iSLCollective.com