Paragraph 1
In the first paragraph, you must state the reason for writing the letter, that is, its purpose.
Paragraph 1: Purpose – to apply for a summer camp job
Many students make the mistake of missing this purpose sentence out but it's very important. Including it will gain you marks.
It only requires one sentence. For example,
I would like to apply for a position at your Devon summer camp this year.
Top vocabulary tip: Do not use contractions in formal letters. They are informal language. So, do not write ‘I’d like to apply…
Paragraph 2
In the second paragraph, you write about bullet point 1. Remember to keep the language informal for this question.
Paragraph 2: describe your personality
Outgoing, fun-loving, energetic, responsible
Remember to keep the language formal. Aim for around 50 words for each of paragraphs 2, 3 and 4. You could write something like this.
I am an outgoing person with lots of energy and a great sense of fun and adventure. I show dedication and a high level of responsibility in everything I do and am known for being very reliable. Furthermore, I am confident working on my own but equally enjoy being part of a team.
Paragraph 3
The third paragraph should cover the second bullet point.
Paragraph 3: say what relevant experience and skills you have
Scout leader, qualified instructor – kayaking & climbing
I have many relevant skills to offer. These include level 4 instructor certificates for both for kayaking and climbing as well as being an experienced dinghy sailor. I was a Scout Leader for two years before going to university and was popular with and respected by all the boys and girls in our pack.
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 4 addresses the third bullet point.
Paragraph 4: explain what sort of work you would like to do.
Lead group activities, campfire cooking
I am especially interested in being an activity leader at the summer camp but would consider any position appropriate to my skills and experience. I would also be willing to organize and lead campfire cooking session several evenings a week as this is another passion of mine and always a favourite with kids.
This letter needs one final sentence to round it off before we add the signoff. For example:
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