Writing Task 2
Argumentative essay – logical reasoning
I am very clever. This is because I got straight-A at school.
When can I write a good essay?
When
I have wide range of vocabulary
I know many grammar structures
Wide horizon
Good reading (text;essay;article) makes good writing
1 topic – text;essay;article – writing
2 topic
100 topic
101
Living abroad
I want to study abroad:
Wide horizon
Make a lot of foreign friends
Better education
Independent life – cooking, time management, money management
Become real adult
I want to live abroad:
More job opportunities – more salary
Better infrastructure – public transport
More exciting life
I would rather (prefer) live on my own.
Who is better at cooking?
Some students have concrete plans to study abroad
Concrete plans – exact things you wanna do soon
Rush into Ving – to hurry to do something
My bro, never rush into marrying
* take my time – take some time to think about something
Change the scenery – move to another place
Some people want to change scenery
Gap year
In my mind = in my opinion = I think
Buy some time – vaqtdan yutdim - Teacher was late today, and it bought me some time to prepare for the class.
On top of that – ustiga-ustak
Job prospect
Unforgettable experience
Carry out research/work placement – do research
Seem/sound right up your street
To be down to something/somebody
It was down to the fact that S + V
I spent many meaningful months in Tashkent. It was down to the fact that I signed up for an English course.
Take an instant like/dislike to somebody/something
Dilnura took an instant dislike to our teacher at first.
Take an instant like to somebody
Start something afresh
New adj – anew adv
Fresh adj – afresh adv
Bonded
I was so ugly that I failed to bond with a friend at school.
Discover myself afresh
In rainy days, I love to immerse in my favorite book.
Because of my teacher, I could immerse myself into English.
Gain + something – get:
Gain weight + experience + respect
I immersed myself into football to gain my girlfriend’s father’s
respect. This is because he is insanely interested in football.
To gain my teacher’s respect, I always make the payment on time.
After a new year’s party, everybody gains some weight ranging from 5 kg to 10 kg.
It was because of the fact that S + V
I was in London. I lost my money. My phone was out of work. On top of that I did not have any relatives there.
Dunyo qarashni kengaytirish – to lengthen my way of looking to the world
Broaden my horizon
Qimmat tajriba orttirish – make extra expensive experience
Cheer sb up
Disadvantage – homesick – lack of support – depression
Via
Life-changing
Last year I married and that was a life-changing moment in my life.
On the whole = generally = in general
Vibrant
Mix with new people – to become friends with other people
Adapt to new situation / new city / new people / new family
Lose touch with your old friends
Disadvantage: language barrier – Korea
Pick up a new language – to learn a new language
Open-minded and willing to accept others opinion and attitudes
Cope with new challenges: isolation/mapping/getting lost
Learn something from scratch
I wanna start my life from scratch
Leave something behind –
Overseas – abroad
New-found freedom
Explore new surroundings
I explored Chimyan for the first time last year
Headache
A newborn child can sometimes be a headache while sleeping.
Fail to realize – don’t understand
You often fail to realize the advantages of learning another language.
Undergo the feelings of frustration
Ordinary people flatly opposed the new regulations about taxes.
Gradually
Over time
Enable sb to V1
I started my independent life. This enabled me to spend my money in a way that I want.
Focus:
Job
Study
Advantages:
Job – study
Disadvantages:
Job – study
Introduction – kirish
2-3 sentences
1 – general statement
2 – rephrase the question
3 – thesis – what I am going to do in this essay
Introduction:
Currently many people decide to migrate to a different country.
They are willing to change their usually scenery to experience either better job opportunities or education system
However, there are both benefits and troubles of living abroad
Introduction:
Currently many people decide to migrate to a different country. They are willing to change their usual scenery to experience either better job opportunities or education system. However, there are both benefits and troubles of living abroad
Body 1 5-7 sentences
1 – What I am going to do in this paragraph.
On the one hand, there are a couple of upsides of having a work placement or studying abroad
2 – my first main idea
First of all, hardly anyone can deny that working conditions in big cities are much better.
3 – supporting statement
To be specific, most offices in urban areas are equipped with modern facilities and technologies
4 – example
For instance, people usually move to New-York because offices are much comfortable there
5 – second idea –
Another advantage for students is that they can receive best education in cosmopolitan cities
6 – supporting statement
This is down to the fact that most prestigious universities are located in big cities such as Oxford, Harvard, MIT or Yale
7 – example / small conclusion
Studying in these kind of universities means that students are guided by professional lecturers and teachers. As a result, working and studying abroad may have a lot of advantages.
Body 2 5-7 sentences
1 – What I am going to do in this paragraph.
On the other hand, people moving abroad for the purpose of working or studying are likely to face a number of challenges
2 – my first main idea
To begin with, people may find it difficult to mix with the culture.
3 – supporting statement
That is, both workers and students may undergo culture shock which can be really frustrating.
4 – example
My friends, for example, visited London two years ago for an extended education program and experienced two months of homesick.
5 – second idea –
Further issue that people need to deal with when they travel is language barrier
6 – supporting statement
It is true that for some people it is not easy to pick up a new language during their stay in a foreign country
7 – example / small conclusion
As a consequence, living overseas for longer period can be very depressing
Conclusion – restate your ideas
To sum up, working and studying overseas may have both advantages and disadvantages. While experiencing better working conditions and having well-educated teachers are considered to be benefits, people may also encounter the difficulties of culture shock and language barrier.
Studying in these kind of universities means that students are guided by professional lecturers and teachers. As a result, working and studying abroad may have a lot of advantages.
Coherence and cohesion
From general to specific
Working conditions are better
Air conditioning
Job prospect is better
They earn a lot of money.
Currently many people decide to migrate to a different country. They are willing to change their usual scenery to experience either better job opportunities or education system. However, there are both benefits and troubles of living abroad
On the one hand, there are a couple of upsides of having a work placement or studying abroad. First of all, hardly anyone can deny that working conditions in big cities are much better. To be specific, most offices in urban areas are equipped with modern facilities and technologies. For instance, people usually move to New-York because offices are much comfortable there. Another advantage for students is that they can receive best education in cosmopolitan cities. This is down to the fact that most prestigious universities are located in big cities such as Oxford, Harvard, MIT or Yale. Studying in these kind of universities means that students are guided by professional lecturers and teachers. As a result, working and studying abroad may have a lot of advantages.
On the other hand, people moving abroad for the purpose of working or studying are likely to face a number of challenges. To begin with, people may find it difficult to mix with the culture. That is, both workers and students may undergo culture shock which can be really frustrating. My friends, for example, visited London two years ago for an extended education program and experienced two months of homesick. Further issue that people need to deal with when they travel is language barrier. It is true that for some people it is not easy to pick up a new language during their stay in a foreign country. As a consequence, living overseas for longer period can be very depressing
To sum up, working and studying overseas may have both advantages and disadvantages. While experiencing better working conditions and having well-educated teachers are considered to be benefits, people may also encounter the difficulties of culture shock and language barrier.
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