• describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is a ecting your work



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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use 
for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
• describe the problem with the equipment
• explain how this problem is a ecting your work
• say what you want the shop or company to do
Write about 150 words in an appropriate format and style.
Dear Madam or Sir 
I am writing to complain about the equipments which I bought from you that I use for my job. 
I am a doctor so I bought medicine boxes and medicine equipments from your shop . When I 
bought many di erent furniture from your shop , equipments liked to me but , I arrived at my 
home with all furnishings , they did not comfort to my home . For example , my house is small 
so , equipments did not contained at my home . Moreover , While I was using the furniture , I 
saw cracks at behind and bottom of equipments . Likewise, cracks were ware , deep and big . 
If cracks did not deep and big , I did not complain about equipments . Furthermore , Colors of 
furnishings was not right for my room . As colour of my room is light blue but color of 
equipments were dark blue . So , I wanted to change it , such as , colors of equipments and 
figures of equipments . If it is possible changing the color of the equipments to air color . I 
assume , you will replace the equipments as it is obviously wrong . 
I hope to hear from you soon. 
your fuithfully 
Shahzoda
Letter
Candidate’s response
MYTESTS.UZ 


Date
18.11.2023
Topshiriq 
talablarining 
bajarilishi
Umumiy tahlil
Xatning ochilish va yakunlash qismlari mavjud, lekin yakuniy qismda 
xatolik bor ‘your fuithfully | yours faithfully’.. Barcha tayanch savollarga 
javob berishga harakat qilgansiz, ammo siz aynan qaysi jihoz yoki mebel 
haqida e’tiroz bildirayotganingizni aniq ko’rsatmagansiz. Undan tashqari, 
siz mebel rangi haqida e’tiroz bildirgansiz, buni odatda xaridorning o’zi 
tanlaydi va buni do’konga shikoyat qilmaydi. Siz bunday xatda do’kon 
tomonidan yo’l qo’yilgan aniq bir xatolik haqida yozishingiz kerak. 

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