IELTS
JOURNAL
18
Varying your language
As with any task 1, this is important. You should not keep repeating the same structures.
The key language when you write about pie charts is proportions and percentages.
Common phrases to see are "the proportion of…" or "the percentage of…". However, you
can also use other words and fractions. These are some:
A large number of people
over a quarter of people
a small minority
A significant
number of people
less than a fifth
This table presents some examples
of how you can change percentages
to fractions or ratios:
Percentage
Fraction
80% four-fifths
75% three-quarters
70% seven
in
ten
65% two-thirds
60% three-fifths
55% more
than
half
50% half
45% more than two fifths
40% two-fifths
35% more than a third
30% less than a third
25% a
quarter
20% a
fifth
15% less than a fifth
10%
one in ten
5%
one in twenty
If the percentages are not exact as above, then you can use qualifiers to make sure your
description remains accurate. Here are some examples:
77% just
over
three
quarters
77%
approximately
three
quarters
49% just
under
a
half
49% nearly a half
32% almost
a
third
Percentage proportion / number /
amount / majority / minority
75% - 85% a very large majority
65% - 75%
a significant proportion
10% - 15% a minority
5%
a very small number
The words above are interchangeable, though number is for
countable nouns and amount
is for uncountable nouns.
Here are 3 useful techniques for describing percentages:
1.
English speakers usually put the percentage at the start of the sentence.
2.
Use
while
,
whereas
or
compared to
(after a comma) to add a comparison.
3.
Use "the figure for" to add another comparison in the next sentence.