Ielts writing Task 1 + 2

in a thesis
led, 
each one of these is going to become
a supportive paragraph
, 
a smaller
paragraph 
but a supportive paragraph
. So, a little bit different. You might see
one introduction paragraph, two body paragraphs, and one conclusion
paragraph.
Conclusion: 
rephrases, paraphrase yourself. Rephrase and summarize your
points.
“In conclusion, going abroad is becoming very popular. I think it’s a good
idea for children to go overseas because it increases the chances of getting a
better education, gain access to different cultures, and becoming more
mature.”
Do you need to give 
examples
 in your essay?
No need, if you are a very good writer with over 300 words in 40 minutes,
you can give examples in your essay. However, if you have a hard time
writing over 300 words in 40 minutes, and being accurate with your
grammar, I would say that you 
should avoid many specific examples.
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When it comes to the 
introduction. No surprise here:
“In recent decades, there has been tremendously economic development 
(is
that true? YES
). However, the gap between the rich and the poor nations
remains considerable 
(is that true? YES)
.”
What structure am I using here? 
Concession & contrast
It’s true that people make more money. However, there are still a lot of poor
people in the world. So I’m 
saying something is true; 
however
, something
else is true.
You can use 
concession & contrast 
in your introduction, your body
paragraphs as well as in your conclusion, you can use it everywhere.