Guide to English Writing

Sample Essays
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IELTS Version
Parents and teachers often disagree on educational approaches. The former believe plenty of 
homework prepares their kids for academic and career success. Teachers, conversely, believe 
students should decompress and engage in non-academic activities after a long school day. 
While both arguments are valid, I agree with teachers, as there is more to life than scholastic 
achievement.
Admittedly, homework benefits children by reinforcing the day’s lessons and helps them 
develop a strong work ethic. Usually, this effort is manifest in better test scores and improved 
opportunities at the college level, not to mention in the workplace. Having said that, children 
who pursue personal interests, like sports or arts, tend to cultivate and master a particular 
passion. Take for example a boy who practices the violin every night instead doing mathematics 
homework he does not enjoy; he will undoubtedly be more successful and satisfied in a career 
in the arts than one in finance, such as an accountant. Thus, homework may in fact hinder his 
growth rather than propel him higher.
Moreover, children given the opportunity to be creative usually join like-minded peers in 
groups. As part of this community, they hone their social skills more effectively than children 
who spend their evenings in isolation doing homework. Those who play team sports, for 
instance, learn new and important skills, such as how to win and lose graciously and how to 
cooperate. More importantly, they appreciate work and play time, so they know how to relax 
after a hard day’s work. In the long run, these youngsters demonstrate greater longevity both 
at school and in the workplace.
In conclusion, children who are allowed to interact and expand their horizons after school 
generally do better academically and career-wise. Thus, homework is not as essential as some 
may think.
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