Guide to English Writing

Sample Essays
47
In some countries, parents want their children to focus on their studies only. Because of this, 
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Modern education is not limited to textbooks and classrooms. Young people can gain knowledge 
everywhere, including at a workplace. Whereas parents in some countries do not want their 
children working during their schooling, I believe that high schoolers who work part time learn 
to balance academics with a work schedule, thereby gaining useful skills and experiences for 
their future careers.
Secondary school students are generally busy with classes and homework. Those who add 
another element to this routine, namely a part-time job, gain time-management skills and 
learn to prioritize daily tasks. Moreover, these teens learn to value their time. For example, a 
student who needs to work on the weekend, but has an assignment due the following Monday, 
will recognize that partying on Saturday night will poorly affect not only his grades, but his 
reputation at work. By ranking his duties and sacrificing occasional social events, he gains an 
appreciation for his free moments and his responsibilities.
In contrast, those who only study will face difficulties in their future workplaces. Their multi-
tasking abilities will be weak, and they will have difficulty assessing the importance of certain 
tasks. While they will likely be able to finish tasks more proficiently, many companies today 
prefer well-rounded employees over those who can accomplish one thing at a time, regardless 
how well they do it. In modern competitive job markets, employers want workers who can 
complete many tasks simultaneously and well, while collaborating with coworkers. Those who 
spent their entire school life just studying lack the skills and experience to keep up in fast-
paced, team-oriented environments.
In conclusion, students focusing only on academics are less prepared for real-world workplaces, 
whereas those working part time are better suited to these demanding environments; they 
will have strong time-management skills and the ability to value their duties to the company 
and their team.
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