Ielts essays abazar alizadeh

 
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23- Unfortunately nowadays many school students drop out of school 
before they graduate. 
In your opinion what are the reasons for school drop-out?
And what ways can you suggest in order to solve the problem?
Today, although most students in Iran complete their education, a large number 
still drop out because of family, social and work pressures. This problem 
requires serious action from both individuals and the government.
Most students who do not complete school do so because of family problems. 
Girls, especially, want to get married and start a family. Some parents are not 
interested in education and do not support their children in studying. Social 
problems are also a contributing factor. Education is compulsory but, despite 
this, some people do not take it seriously. Furthermore, jobs are available even 
if students do not have a good education. The third reason is work pressure. 
Some families are poor and need their children to work in order to increase the 
income. All these problems will create young people who do not have any skills 
and who will not be able to improve their lives for the family and the country.
There are several things that can be done about these problems. Parents 
should be encouraged to send their children to school. Schools with baby-
minding facilities should be opened specially for married students. The 
government needs to stress the importance of education and even offer financial 
support to students to continue. This will encourage students to stay at school 
rather than start working.
In conclusion, there are several things that the government can do to allow more 
people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to 
change if the country’s young people are to achieve their full potential.
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