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'private schools' essay
Here's an essay that I wrote with my students using the ideas and the advice about
organisation in last week's
lesson
.
Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay
taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not
need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with
this view.
For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for
private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax
reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex
process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may
not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or
fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for this.
Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their children to private
schools, we might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich.
In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports
public schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to have a high quality education
system with equal opportunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated
workforce, and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in
private schools may also see the advantages of this in their own lives. For example, a
company owner will need well qualified and competent staff, and a well-funded
education system can provide such employees.
In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people
who choose private education.
(269 words, band 9)
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