Sample Academic Writing Part 1
Candidate Response 2
The statistice show the number of tripe mad by children in one country over the past to years
to travel to end from school using different modes of transport.
children walking (13 million) are the by far highset, while, the children use bus (7 million) are
a bit higher than the children use car in 1990. However, The children use car (11 million) in
2010 significant higher than The children use bus (5 million) in 2010. In contrest, The
children walking (6 million) are Twice as high as the children use cycling (3 million) in 2010.
overall, At the end priod there were 12,000,000 children walking in 1990, 11,000,000
children use care in 2010 and 5,000,000 children use bus.
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