from snow-capped mountains, groundwater, and the water from seas and oceans, is evaporated by the heat from the sun, producing water vapor. The resulting steam is then condensed to form clouds. Following this step, the newly formed clouds move to mountainous areas, where there is snowfall. They are also blown to forested land, where it rains most of the time. (This paragraph outlines various steps in forming clouds and what happens
when there is precipitation in different areas. There is an appropriate use of
the passive voice, sequencing vocabulary, and non-defining relative
clauses.)
4) Second body paragraph As a result of precipitation in the form of either rain or snow, runoff water flows on the ground creating rivers and water streams, which eventually find their way to seas and oceans, where the cycle repeats itself. (This paragraph is mainly focused on the second part of the cycle using
non-defining relative clauses and the appropriate use of active and passive
voice for this type of writing.)
Sample writing The diagram illustrates how water, which originates from seas and oceans ,
goes through a natural cycle to produce rain and snow.
Overall, the water from oceans and seas is evaporated to form clouds before
falling on the ground as rain and snow in different regions.
Based on the given diagram, the runoff water, which mainly comes from
snow-capped mountains, groundwater, and the water from seas and oceans,
is evaporated by the heat from the sun, producing water vapor. The
resulting steam is then condensed to form clouds. Following this step, the
newly formed clouds move to mountainous areas, where there is snowfall .
They are also blown to forested land, where it rains most of the time .
As a result of precipitation in the form of either rain or snow, runoff water
flows on the ground creating rivers and water streams, which eventually
find their way to seas and oceans , where the cycle repeats itself .
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