This sample writing shows a partial-agreement type in which two contradicting reasons are described, and the writer’s opinion is solidly cited. Simple, compound, and complex sentence structures are appropriately used along with flexible use of advanced vocabulary, collocations, and expressions. The essay is logically organized, and ideas are well-developed for a high band score. (Advanced vocabulary, collocations, and expressions are underlined in this sample writing.) Discussion Essays Discussion essays are quite common in the IELTS writing task 2 for both modules. In this essay type, the question
introduces two different opinions on a topic, and candidates need to discuss both views and give their own opinion.
So, the question has three parts to be addressed: reasons to explain each view and the writer’s opinion. Therefore,
the essay could have three body paragraphs; however, if the writer’s opinion is clearly stated in the introduction
and the conclusion, there is no need to develop the third body paragraph for this purpose. Note that the number of
body paragraphs does not affect the band score as long as the questions are fully addressed throughout the writing.
Topic #3 Human activity has negatively affected the natural environment around the world. Some people believe that
governments should immediately take action to reverse these effects, while others think there are more urgent
problems to be tackled.
Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.
Reasons for the first view: 1. Our life depends on a well-protected environment.
2. A country with a sound natural environment could be more successful in other aspects.
Reasons for the second view 1. The importance of having decent healthcare and education systems
2. The economic and technological developments of a country are more important than its natural
environment.
Choosing one reason for each point of view is enough to develop each body paragraph. However, the writer’s
opinion should be cited in the introduction, and it should also be restated in conclusion to develop a 4-paragraph
essay. Note that each body paragraph should hold only one or two main reasons as body paragraphs with several
main ideas are likely to be confusing.
