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hand, this amount noticeably declined to 5.8 million for Germany.
Similarly, the trends for England and Spain showed a moderate
decrease to 4.8 million for the former and 4.4 million for the latter.
(This paragraph shows a contrast between the third and the other two
categories described in the first body paragraph. Some comparative
structures, specific vocabulary, phrases, and details have successfully
described changes.)
Sample writing

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The table
 
indicates
 
data related to the number of people diagnosed with
three types of ailments in the US, England, Germany, and Spain in 1990.
Overall , cardiovascular diseases affected the highest number of people in
all countries, whereas diabetes was held accountable for the lowest number
of cases of poor health conditions.
Regarding the given statistics , cardiovascular diseases affected most of the
population in England, Germany, and Spain with 6.6, 6.3, and 5.9 million
people, respectively . However, this figure had a noticeable reduction to 4.6
million Americans. In contrast, diabetes affected the lowest number of
individuals in all these countries. The figure had a significant drop to 2.2
million for the US. In comparison, it was raised minimally for Spain,
reaching the second-lowest number of diabetic patients with 2.3 million.
Obesity came second for most countries except for the US, where the
number of obese people reached a peak of 7.1 million. On the other hand,
this amount noticeably declined to 5.8 million for Germany. Similarly, the
trends for England and Spain showed a moderate decrease to 4.8 million for
the former and 4.4 million for the latter .
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This is an example of a high band score for task 1; it clearly
describes all trends and their changes using specific and academic