1. Creating jobs for the locals
2. Boosting
the economy
Disadvantages of the tourism industry
1. Air pollution due
to frequent cheap flights
2. Loss of local culture
Explanatory sample writing
Introduction
Step 1:
Introduce and paraphrase the topic
(This is to avoid repetition.)
The growth of the tourism industry has been remarkable globally in recent years.
Step 2: Thesis statement
(Outline the main advantage(s) and disadvantage(s) briefly; giving an opinion is not
needed as the question has not asked for it.)
This industry has benefited countries worldwide economically; however, it might have some environmental
and cultural drawbacks.
First body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(In
a simple sentence, introduce the main advantage(s).)
The two main advantages of international traveling are creating jobs for local people and boosting the
economy.
Step 2: Explanation
(Explain the merits in 2-4 sentences.)
In simple terms, traveling overseas will engage various businesses and bring about more job vacancies.
International airline companies provide people with affordable flights and accommodation.
Correspondingly, the hotel industry, local shops, and restaurants will have to employ more staff to serve and
welcome travelers. This pattern will increase employment rates creating a healthy economy, which eases the
burden of joblessness on the government’s shoulders. Therefore, more urgent issues could be taken care of if
the economy evolves on its own.
Step 3: Example
(Provide an example for better support.)
An example of this is Europe, an attractive tourist destination in the past two decades. A significant number
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