What are the advantages and disadvantages of online education?

COMMENT
Task Response:
Your essay seems to address the topic adequately. You have discussed both advantages and disadvantages of online education. However, it could be more balanced, as you seem to lean towards the advantages. Additionally, you should be careful with the clarity of your ideas and the organization of your essay.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Your essay has some issues with coherence and cohesion. It lacks a clear structure and flow of ideas. Your ideas seem scattered and not well-organized. Consider using more paragraph breaks to separate different points and improving the transition between sentences and paragraphs for better cohesion.

Lexical Resource:
Your use of vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some issues. For instance, "prosses" should be "process," and "acces" should be "access." You could also use a wider range of vocabulary to make your essay more engaging and precise.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
There are several grammatical errors in your essay. Some examples include:

"…when the distance and schedule make learning difficult and impossible." This sentence is a bit confusing. It would be better to say, "when distance and scheduling make traditional learning difficult."

"Their only excuse for missing class is not getting online." This sentence is not clear. It could be improved to say, "The only reason they might miss a class is if they cannot access it online."
"Such fees can expensive for some students." Here, it should be "Such fees can be expensive for some students."
"And also they should study any time they want." This sentence is awkward. It could be revised to say, "Furthermore, students can study at their convenience."
"studying alone with only computers can be terrifying because the online environment is a much different atmosphere that takes some getting used to." This sentence is unclear. It could be better phrased as, "Studying alone with only computers can be daunting, as the online environment is quite different and may take some time to adapt to."
Overall, your essay needs improvements in all four criteria. Here are potential scores for each: