Ielts writing Task 1 + 2


Noted:  transformed into  and  converted into : this means to  change something. We  cannot



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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1&2 By Rachel Mitchell (3)11

Noted: 
transformed into 
and 
converted into
: this means to 
change something.
We 
cannot say “the apartment was 
transformed into 
the factory”
We 
cannot say “the trees were 
transformed into 
the airport”, we 
cannot
change a tree into an airport. Instead, we can say “the trees were chopped
down and replaced with the airport.”
We 
only can use 
transformed into 
and 
converted into 
when we are 
talking
about an area
.
Ex: the park was transformed into the airport (because 
a park is an area of
land
)
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We can transform a rural area into an urban area.
The neighborhood was transformed completely.
The old houses were rebuilt.
Very few trees remained.
Trees were chopped down/ uprooted/ cleared/ cleared away.
The area was removed, but remained vacant/ remained undeveloped.
ARTICLE:
We use 
“a” 
for 
new
, and 
“the” 
for 
old
Ex: in the south, 
the
 
residential area was replaced by 
a
 warehouse 
(it’s new).
In the north
the
 residential area was removed to make way for the
development of 
a
 stadium 
(it’s new).
Don’t say “
the left/right side of town
”. But 
it’s ok for you to say “
on the
left/right side of the map

Apartment building = apartment complex
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MAP SAMPLE
The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a
25 year period from 1980 to 2005.
ANSWER:
The maps 
illustrate
the developments 
which took place in 
the coastal town of
Youngsville 
between 1980 and 2005
.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps 
reveals a complete transformation
from
a largely rural 
to 
a mainly urban area.
In the year 1980
, the town was 
a much greener residential area with a large
number of trees 
and individual houses, but 
during the next 25 years
, the town
saw a number of significant changes

The most noticeable is that 
all of the
trees in the south of the River Alanah 
were 
chopped down
, with all the
houses along the railway line 
being demolished to make way for 
skyscrapers.
Moreover, a new industrial zone with warehouses and factories 
sprang up
around the school and airport.
In contrast

only a few trees 
in the north of the river
remained
. The woodland
was cleared 
and 
converted into 
a golf course, a park, and car parting facilities.
Further developments were 
the construction of a stadium 
next to 
the north-
east corner of the lake and the extension of the railway line from the river
running directly to the north. A Marina was also constructed at the mouth of
the river.
194 words.
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PROCESS
Type 1:
Man-made process: 
how things are made, how things are produced,
how things are manufactured, how things are done.

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