Body Paragraph 2: Chosen side (Two or more supporting ideas should be given to illustrate that your opinion has more ideas than opposing side) Second body paragraph is mainly written in a Multiple-Idea paragraph. On the other hand, idolising celebrities who are not excellent role models could result in negative effects. One reason for this view is that young adults tend to spend a lot of time following what their idols do or where they would go. This may distract them from studying at school and they could a bad academic results. Furthermore, young adults who are not mature enough to judge what is suitable and proper within society , they may copy their idols’ bad behaviors such as smoking, drinking alcohol or even drugs, resulting in spoil young people’s health and future life. Conclusion: Paraphrasing Thesis and Outline statement (Not including any new idea and only paraphrasing your position) Phrases that could be used instead of “In Conclusion”
According to above analysis
From what has been discussed above
To draw a conclusion
It is therefore clear that
All the existing data provides a concrete foundation that
Based on above mentioned facts
In the light of these facts
According to the facts outlined above
From the points enlisted above
Based on the arguments outlined above All the existing data provides a concrete foundation that even though youngsters may learn some useful life experiences from top athletes who do not set good examples, the proclivity of admiring and imitating these stars may result in a wide range of adverse effects and thus is a negative issue in today's society.
