How to Write Great Essays

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TIMED PROMPT 1
You have probably heard the expression, if at first you don’t succeed, try, try again. What is your
view on continuing to try and possibly failing before succeeding? Plan and write an essay in
which you develop your perspective on this issue. Support your position with examples from
your experiences, your studies, and your reading.
Sample Essay Prompts and Essays  CHAPTER 8 
HOW TO WRITE GREAT ESSAYS


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HOW TO WRITE GREAT ESSAYS

CHAPTER 8 Sample Essay Prompts and Essays
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There are many factors involved in achieving success. But what if countless
failures end with a poor result? It is not failures themselves that lead to suc-
cess, but rather a combination of natural ability, persistence, and even luck.
When I started competitive swimming, at age seven, I had some natural
ability. Swimming came easily to me. When shown the correct techniques for
strokes, turns, and starts, I was able to employ them much quicker than many
of my teammates. In fact, within a few months, I was swimming faster than
some kids who were on the team for a few years. They had “failed” many
times in the meets they swam in, but it didn’t seem to help them understand
the techniques or to come up with better strategies. I “failed” just a few times
that first year, but my times were better. My natural ability helped me to
achieve more in comparison with their numerous failures.
Persistence has also been a factor in my success. For the past eight years,
I have attended practice at least three days a week, with a short break
between each of two seasons. I swim at least 300 days a year. This persist-
ence has allowed me to improve both technique and speed. In comparison,
those who don’t continue to practice frequently and find ways to swim better
and faster don’t make the times I do. On my old team, we practiced for a
hour and a half, three days a week, forty weeks a year. On my new team,
practice is five days a week for two hours, and we have just four weeks off a
year. This new practice schedule has helped me to take seconds off every time,
and my new team as a whole performs better than the old one.
Luck is also a factor in success. I once won a regional meet because my
competitor, who was one hundredth of a second ahead, made an error and was
disqualified. Another time, a competitor was sick on the day of the meet and
didn’t swim his best time (which would have beaten me). My successes at those
meets involved, at least in part, luck.
So failure is just one part of success. The more important factors are natu-
ral ability, persistence, and luck.
EVALUATION
This essay succeeds on a number of levels. First, it takes a stand on the prompt and adheres
to it throughout. Evidence and pertinent examples support the position. Second, it is well-
organized. The five-paragraph structure allows the writer to explore his three chosen sub-
jects, while maintaining a clear focus. This allows the reader to follow him easily. Third, there
are very few grammar, usage, or mechanics errors. And fourth, the vocabulary is appropri-
ate and varied. The author could have improved the concluding paragraph, which mostly
restated the introduction.
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