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TIMED PROMPT 2
Many parents give children a weekly or monthly allowance regardless of their behavior because
they believe an allowance teaches children to be financially responsible. Other parents only give
children an allowance as a reward for completing chores or when they have behaved properly.
Explain what you think parents should do and why.
Should parents pay children for doing chores is a good question. My parents
paid me, and my brothers and sister. I never liked doing chores, but getting an
allowance each week (if I did my chores) made it not so bad. In fact, some-
times I did extra (like reorganizing the pantry) to get some extra money for
something I really wanted.
I think having my allowance depend on my doing chores made me under-
stand what it’s like to work. In the “Real World,” you don’t get paid if you
don’t do your work. That’s how it was in our house.
I also learned that it’s hard work to keep a house going, I learned to
appreciate all the hard work my mom and dad use to do. In addition, I
learned how to save money. I would set aside my allowance to save up for
something I wanted, like a new CD player or outfit.
In my opinion, parents should give an allowance for doing chores, but it
shouldn’t be too much. Children should know that they need to help no matter
what. Too much money I think would make him or her feel like their hired help
or something. Contrarily, too little money can make him or her feel like their
help isn’t worth anything to his or her parents. So finding the right amount is
important.
In conclusion, giving children an allowance for doing household chores is a
good idea. Children learn to work for their money and save what they earn.
EVALUATION
This essay satisfies the requirements of the writing prompt in an abbreviated manner, giv-
ing only brief examples and developing ideas inconsistently. It has a general focus, there is
an obvious attempt at organization, and ideas are presented in a logical progression. How-
ever, there is an uneven control of mechanics, and sentence structure is lacking in variety.
Word choice is not formal enough (“made it not so bad,” “hired help or something,” “con-
trarily”) and negatively affects the quality of the essay.
TIMED PROMPT 3
A few decades ago, many families had half a dozen or more children. Nowadays, more and more
families are choosing to have only one or two children. Are smaller families better than larger
ones? Why or why not? State your position and support it with specific reasons and examples.
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