Ielts writing task 1 academic

The people living next-door were furious. 
The cat sleeping in the garden was woken up by the noise. 
The children playing rugby outside were quite scared when it crashed. 
We had to apologise to a lady walking past the house. 
This bears no resemblance to the product 
advertised
on the website. 
I hope the information 
provided
will be sufficient. 
The details 
given
in the instruction booklet were useless. 
The designers 
employed 
by your company should be dismissed. 
The helicopter was heavy, making it almost impossible to carry. 
The plane crashed into the greenhouse, causing considerable damage
.
The designers who are 
employed… The 
designers who are 
being employed…

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STRATEGY: PARTICIPLE CLAUSES 
The people living next-door were furious. 
The cat sleeping in the garden was woken up by the noise. 
The children playing rugby outside were quite scared when it crashed. 
We had to apologise to a lady walking past the house. 
This bears no resemblance to the product advertised on the website. 
I hope the information provided will be sufficient. 
The details given in the instruction booklet were useless. 
The designers employed by your company should be dismissed. 
The helicopter was heavy, 
making
it almost impossible to carry. 
The plane crashed into the greenhouse, 
causing 
considerable damage.
The helicopter was 
heavy, which made it 
almost impossible to 
carry. 

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STRATEGY: PARTICIPLE CLAUSES