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When was it?
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What was the original opinion?
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Why you changed it?
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And explain how you felt about it?
Sample Answer:
Opinions tend to get modified often and that keeps on altering every time a new perspective
comes into the picture. One such incident where my preconceived notion was changed upside
down was on my 16th birthday.
Until my 16th birth anniversary celebration, I believed that true ebullience and vitality come
only when we celebrate an occasion in the grandest way possible and that throwing lavish
parties was synonymous with real joy. I used to celebrate each of my birthdays in the best
possible way as per what a typical teenager would think and want to celebrate as.
Then on my 16th birthday, due to certain circumstantial prevalence, I couldn’t actualize my
plans to celeb
rate the year of ‘sweet 16’ in the way I imagined it to be. I still remember how
crumpled my emotions were and how disconcerted I was until my parents took me to an
orphanage. That was when my definition of contentment was changed and a film of pseudo-
happiness was denounced.
My parents bought lots of gifts and until we reached the orphanage, I didn’t even have a shade
of the idea for whom those gifts were being bought for. The next moment I vividly remember
was the wide grin and the sounds of chuckling coming from the beautiful faces of those
underprivileged children. I was so contented and overwhelmed with emotions that I couldn’t
hold myself to stay and play with those kids for the rest of the day and that indeed was a
moment of epiphany for me. This incident not only made my 16th birthday the best one to
date, but it also changed my opinion and brought me to the actual horizon of humanity and
true happiness.
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