Don’t try to show the reader how smart you are. Don’t write like a writer.
Try to be clear
.
Why should you use
might, may, could, can
?
To show something that can happen.
Don’t make a statement sound like
100% or 0%,
show that things are possible
by saying
“maybe it could/
maybe it can.”
A system of a wealthy nation
could be
very beneficial……. because it
may be
the best chance to develop.
The first sentence of each paragraph
, we should
tell the reader what the topic
is
;
tell the reader what you think about the topic.
Keep your ideas short, clear and well linked, and well signal
“because, for
instance, moreover”
it helps everyone understand your writing.
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THESIS-LED ESSAY STRUCTURE
Remember there is
no big difference
between thesis-led and argument-led.
The only difference is
the organization
and
where the information is
. The first
paragraph will be obviously the introduction.
INTRODUCTION:
What do we want to have in the introduction?
The context
:
Personal opinion
usually be written following the impersonal
opinions
BODY PARAGRAPHS:
no personal opinion in the body paragraph
·
Body paragraph 1:
2-3 points
·
Body paragraph 2:
2-3 points
CONCLUSION:
Restate the context in the introduction.
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THESIS-LED SAMPLE
Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others
believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior
most.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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