Today more people are overweight than ever before

How to write cause/effect essays in IELTS?
Cause and effect essay questions in IELTS Writing task 2 give you a problem and ask you to state the main causes of this problem and discuss its possible effects.

This is an example of cause/effect IELTS writing task 2 question:

Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What are the main effects of this epidemic?


Generating ideas
After you’ve read the question, you can clearly determine the problem: growing number of overweight people.
But before you start to write your essay, it’s a good idea to think of 2-3 causes and 2-3 possible effects of the problem.


Causes of obesity:

1. 
   inactive lifestyle (relying on cars instead of walking, fewer physical demands at work, inactive leisure activities)
   
2. 
   unhealthy eating habits (eating fast-food, drinking high-calorie beverages, consuming large portions of food, eating irregularly)
   

Effects of obesity:

1. 
   physical health problems
   
2. 
   loss of productivity
   
3. 
   depressions and mental disorders
   

Now, after we’ve generated the main ideas for causes and effects, it’s time to use these ideas in our essay.


Band 9 answer structure
As you know, there are many ways to structure your essay, but we’ll use a structure that has been approved by many IELTS examiners to be high-scoring and coherent.
Band-9 essay structure:

• 
  Introduction
  
• 
  Body paragraph 1 - causes
  
• 
  Body paragraph 2 - effects
  
• 
  Conclusion
  

Let’s take a look at each of these sections in detail.


Introduction
Write your introduction in two sentences:

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