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Sample Answer 29 
The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from
all sources and renewables in the year 2009 
The four pie charts compare the electricity generated between Germany and France during 2009, 
and it is measured in billions kWh. Overall, it can be seen that conventional thermal was the main 
source of electricity in Germany, whereas nuclear was the main source in France. 
The bulk of electricity in Germany, whose total output was 560 billion kWh, came from 
conventional thermal, at 59.6%. In France, the total output was lower, at 510 billion kWh, and in 
contrast to Germany, conventional thermal accounted for just 10.3%, with most electricity coming 
from nuclear power (76%). In Germany, the proportion of nuclear power generated electricity was 
only one fifth of the total. 
Moving on to renewables, this accounted for quite similar proportions for both countries, at 
approximately 15% of the total electricity generated. In detail, in Germany, most of the renewables 
consisted of wind and biomass, totaling around 75%, which was far higher than for hydroelectric 
(17.7%) and solar (6.1%). The situation was very different in France, where hydroelectric made up 
80.5% of renewable electricity, with biomass, wind and solar making up the remaining 20%. 
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Sample Answer 30 
The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 
The bar chart shows the number of British people who emigrated to five destinations 
over the period 2004 to 2007. It is evident from the chart that throughout the period, 
the most popular place to move to was Australia. 
Emigration to Australia stood at just over 40,000 people in 2004, which was 
approximately 6,000 higher than for Spain, and twice as high as the other three 
countries. Apart from a jump to around 52,000 in 2006, it remained around this level 
throughout the period. 
The next most popular country for Britons to move to was Spain, though its 
popularity declined over the time frame to finish at below 30,000 in 2007. Despite 
this, the figure was still higher than for the remaining three countries. Approximately 
20,000 people emigrated to New Zealand each year, while the USA fluctuated 
between 20-25,000 people over the period. 
Although the number of visitors to France spiked to nearly 35,000 in 2005, it was the 
country that was the least popular to emigrate to at the end of the period, at just 
under 20,000 people.