Ielts – writing section

Introduction

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  Paraphrasing the question
  
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  Overview
  

- type – man made / natural
- process style – cyclical / linear
- stages – 8 / 10
- what is produced
Body 1

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  4 / 5 stages of 8/10
  

Body 2

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  4 / 5 stages of 8/10
  

Paraphrasing the question: The diagram illustrates the way milk is produced and processed into cheese, cream as well as the butter and packaged for sale to customers
Overview: To begin with, it is clear that the entire production of milk and diary products is man-made with a liner style of stages. It is very obvious that it has eight consecutive stages from the beginning to the end of the process.
Body 1: In the first four stages, cows graze in the fields after which they are taken to the factory where they are milked by milking machine twice a day. Following this, the milked milk is put into refrigeration storage. In the next step, the milk is loaded into a tanker where it is then ready to be delivered to the diary on a daily basis.
Body 2: In the last four stages, once the milk is delivered to the diary, it is subsequently put through a pasteurization process and also turned into various dairy products such as cheese, cream and butter. Finally, as soon as the milk and dairy products have been processed and packaged, they are then sent out to supermarkets and shops where they are displayed and ready for purchase by consumers


SAMPLE ESSAY


The diagram illustrates the way milk is produced and processed into cheese, cream as well as the butter and packaged for sale to customers
To begin with, it is clear that the entire production of milk and diary products is man-made with a liner style of stages. It is very obvious that it has eight consecutive stages from the beginning to the end of the process.
In the first four stages, cows graze in the fields after which they are taken to the factory where they are milked by milking machine twice a day. Following this, the milked milk is put into refrigeration storage. In the next step, the milk is loaded into a tanker where it is then ready to be delivered to the diary on a daily basis.
In the last four stages, once the milk is delivered to the diary, it is subsequently put through a pasteurization process and also turned into various dairy products such as cheese, cream and butter. Finally, as soon as the milk and dairy products have been processed and packaged, they are then sent out to supermarkets and shops where they are displayed and ready for purchase by consumers
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