kissed close and long
: replaces (in
) earlier ‘kissed each other’ (,
)––a rare change in the direction of reciprocal passion. See similar
alterations on pp.
, , , . Thus after changes from MS to
(listed in note to p. ), making Sue less spontaneous and more
‘elusive’, Hardy in the last revised edition reverses direction in character-
izing Sue.
though his kiss
. . .
damnation: Jude’s recognition of his inconsistency as
a Christian is
first added in .
Jeremy Taylor . . . Newman: theological writers from the seventeenth to
the nineteenth centuries. Jeremy Taylor (
–); Joseph Butler (–
); Philip Doddridge (–); William Paley (–); Edward
Pusey (
–); John Henry Newman (–).
possibly with scarce any man: Sue was originally said to be unfit for mar-
riage ‘possibly with any man’ (MS
, ). This is weakened to
‘possibly with scarce any man’ in
, in the small group of late changes
which hint at more warmth in Sue. See note to p.
above.
committing no sin (also , ): MS adds ‘There is only one law on
this subject in Nature, or in God’s eye––whichever expression you like
best for the same thing––and that is, for a man . . . ’. Also in serial.
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