For a man and a woman to live on intimate terms when one feels as
I do is
adultery
: a sentiment familiar from Grant Allen’s The Woman who Did
(
): ‘Unchastity . . . is union without love.’
J. S. Mill’s words: the quotation from John Stuart Mill On Liberty ()
first appears in . Mill (partly because of his On the Subjection of
Women
) was standard reading already for the
fictional ‘New Woman’ such
as Evadne in Sarah Grand’s The Heavenly Twins (
), or Jessamine in
A Super
fluous Woman ().
argumentum ad verecundiam
: argument based on an appeal to the
statements of recognized authorities.
Humboldt: the words are quoted from Wilhelm von Humboldt’s The
Sphere and Duties of Government
(
) in Mill’s On Liberty. The citation
captures Humboldt’s stress on the importance of individual freedom
even for the vitality of the whole state and nation. The reference was
added in
.
‘Where Duncliffe . . . Away . . .’: both quotations are from Shaftesbury
Feair
by William Barnes (
–), the dialect poet and Hardy’s much
admired friend.
‘Where
Stour . . . fed’: from Drayton’s Polyolbion.
toled: enticed. Cf. Tess, who speaks dialect at home and ‘ordinary
English’ abroad.
Yes; with a curious . . . seemingly
(
, also): MS: ‘I am not sure
that the word loving describes it.’
They seem to be one person split in two!
: this, like pp.
and , suggests
Explanatory Notes
a comparison with Catherine and Heathcli
ff in Wuthering Heights, who
also claim to be one person. See notes to p.
above and pp. and
below.
good-now: Hardy glossed this as ‘you may be sure’
something within me tells me (, also): in MS the inner something
is speci
fied as being ‘the voice of God speaking through nature’. See also
note to p.
below for another removal of a religious reference.
Laon and Cythna: a reference to lovers in Shelley’s poem of that name
(
), who were in an earlier version brother and sister. See also p.
below.
Paul and
Virginia: lovers in J. H. B. de Saint Pierre’s novel (
) who
grow up as brother and sister. See notes to pp.
and above.
rummer: large glass.
rafted
: troubled, disturbed.
appearance of kissing her . . . imitated: this pretence of Sue’s is inserted in
; in MS, , and ‘she shrank even from that’ (the feigned
kiss). This shrinking was in keeping with her original simple spontaneity.
See note to p.
above.
‘The soldier-saints . . . bliss’: Browning, ‘The Statue and the Bust’. Jude
asserts not a loss of faith, but a refusal to keep the Commandments. See
also pp.
, , , .
The
Church . . . but here. (
, also): Jude’s recognition that he
must turn his back on the Church is not found in MS.
the father of a woman’s child . . . her: a view Hardy held strongly, in
scandalous opposition to the orthodox opinion that paternity was an
important social fact bearing on the inheritance of property and therefore
appropriate to be dealt with by laws relating to marriage and divorce. In a
letter to Millicent Fawcett, a su
ffragette leader, Hardy speaks of ‘the
present pernicious conventions in respect of . . . the father of a woman’s
child (that it is anybody’s business but the woman’s own, except in cases
of disease or insanity)’ (Collected Letters, iii.
).
I didn’t dislike you to (): this again is a late increase in Sue’s warmth
of feeling as compared with ‘don’t dislike you to, very much’ (
,
). See note to p. above.
Crucify me, if you will!: another of Jude’s claims to Christ-status. See
note to p.
above and contrast notes to pp. and .
neither length nor breadth
. . . can divide me: Romans
: –. Jude’s
secular application of Paul’s refusal to be separated from the love of God
is in keeping with similar equations which in
would have been
thought sacrilegious.
They had this room
: added in
; not in or .
just out of her standards: having completed her elementary education by
passing seven national tests or ‘standards’, the latter became the term for
Explanatory Notes
the classes through which successive moves were made by pupils as they
passed the tests.
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