PART THIRD
‘For there was no other girl . . . like her!’: the quotation from Sappho refers
to Sue, who in the event proves hostile to marriage and physical love.
lived carelessly with his wife: ‘Live joyfully with the wife whom thou lovest
all the days of the life of thy vanity’ (Ecclesiastes
:).
Melchester: Salisbury.
his exemplar
: Christ. See note to p.
above. Contrast Phillotson as
Christ pp.
and (note).
the most graceful architectural pile in England: Salisbury Cathedral.
O I have tried not to! (, also): in MS Sue is more emphatic about
despising him: ‘O no no!’ See note to p.
above.
she had hardly expected him to kiss her
(
, also): in MS Sue comes
forward ‘so impulsively that Jude felt sure a moment later that she had
half unconsciously expected him to kiss her’; evidence of her spontaneity
in the original version.
subdued to what he works in . . . : Shakespeare, Sonnets . The sonnet does
not regard the subduing with Sue’s approval.
Jude had a conviction . . . shape of words (, also): this belief that
his drunken visit caused her engagement is not found in MS.
Explanatory Notes
Paley and Butler: William Paley’s Evidences of Christianity () and
Joseph Butler’s The Analogy of Religion (
), orthodox defences of
Christianity, the latter particularly arguing that in a future life the
injustices of the present world will be remedied.
Wardour Castle . . . Fonthill: Wardour Castle, Wiltshire, was designed by
James Paine, and built
–; Fonthill: Fonthill Abbey (also in
Wiltshire) was built in mock-Gothic for William Beckford in
–.
Del
Sarto . . . Carlo Dolci: sixteenth- and seventeenth-century Italian
painters.
Lely or Reynolds: Sir Peter Lely (–), court painter to Charles II,
and Sir Joshua Reynolds (
–) painted portraits and other secular
subjects, here contrasted with the religious paintings of the Italians that
Jude admires.
Ishmaelite: outcast (Genesis : –).
Training-School: both Hardy’s sisters and his cousin Tryphena Sparks
attended teacher training colleges of this sort.
marine deity: the frieze was, of course, in the British Museum; another
reference associating Sue with the pagan, rather than the Christian,
tradition in the early part of the novel.
regarding her: after these words MS deletes ‘and saw in her as it were the
rough material called himself done into another sex––idealized, softened,
and puri
fied.’ This is never restored since it pushes to extremes their
‘two-in-oneness’ (see note to p.
below) and the incestuous suggestion
of p.
.
Lemprière . . . Shakespeare: the list of authors includes many satirists; all
also include passages which might be thought of as indecent. Lemprière:
John Lemprière (
–), author of a popular classical dictionary;
Scarron
: Paul Scarron (
–), a writer of French burlesques; De
Brantôme
: Pièrre de Bourdeilles (?
–), French chronicler.
“twitched the robe . . . fancy draped”: Browning, in ‘Too Late’, refers to a
dead love who married another man; other quotations from Browning
occur on pp.
, , , .
“O ghastly glories . . . gibbeted Gods!” (, also): Swinburne’s
‘Hymn to Proserpine’, MS adds: ‘Though all men abase them before you
in spirit, and all knees bend,
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I kneel not neither adore you, but, standing,
look to the end.’
She looked up trustfully: in MS she only looks at him ‘caressingly and
trustfully’.
inserts ‘and her voice seemed trying to nestle in his
breast,’ as here. See note to p.
above.
Ganymedes
(
, also): cupbearer of the gods. MS has the more
direct ‘Cupid’.
dew-bit: morning snack.
It did just occur to me (, also): MS has ‘It never occurred to
me . . . ’.
Explanatory Notes
Everything is my fault always!
(
, also): MS adds ‘The sense that
sex was dividing them caused them to regard each other with a mutual
distress.’
I admit
. . . avail myself of it (
, also): Jude’s confession of
dissembling towards Sue is not in MS. There he only says ‘I was quite
aware that you did not suspect till within the last meeting or two what I
was feeling about you.’ See note to p.
above.
Roman-Britannic antiquities: Hardy himself was keenly interested in
these. In
he read a paper on ‘Some Romano-British Relics Found at
Max Gate Dorchester’ to the Dorset Natural History and Antiquarian
Field Club (text in H. Orel, Thomas Hardy’s Personal Writings (London:
Macmillan,
), –).
National schoolmaster
: National schools were Anglican, as opposed to
British schools which were Nonconformist in orientation.
acquired a corpse-like sharpness: added in .
because I meant to––love you: this is weakened from a disclaimer ‘that I
love you’ in
and . Neither reading is in MS.
Venus
Urania: the heavenly Aphrodite, goddess of spiritual or intellectual
not sexual love.
others of her age and sex: MS deletes: ‘And they tried to persuade them-
selves that what had happened was of no consequence, and that they
could soon be cousins and friends and warm correspondents . . .’
even if my father were friendly enough: this implies that he is still alive. Cf.
pp.
, , .
‘. . . I can find no way . . . your womanhood’: from Browning, ‘The Worst
of It’. See also pp.
, , , .
in the delicate voice of an epicure in emotions
: this developed in
from
MS ‘in a re
flective and tender voice’. See note to p. above. It is a
characteristic of the ‘New Woman’ to seek new feelings. Gwen Waring in
The Yellow Aster
(
) says ‘I like new sensation. I am curious . . .’ and
makes a disastrous marriage.
old-Midsummer eves: June, Midsummer day.
‘The Wife’s Guide to Conduct’: reference to a type of book advising
women on their duties as wives, daughters, and mothers. Typical
examples by Sarah Stickney Ellis were The Wives of England: Their Social
Duties and Domestic Habits
(
), The Mothers of England: Their
In
fluence and Responsibility (), and The Daughters of England: Their
Position in Society, Character and Responsibilities
(
).
Sebastiano’s Lazarus: Hardy had seen this picture, painted by Sebastiano
del Piombo (
–), in the National Gallery, London.
‘insulted Nature sometimes vindicated her rights’: from Gibbon’s Decline
and Fall of the Roman Empire
, chapter
.
Explanatory Notes
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