If we have
2 time points
(that could be
days/weeks/months/years/decades
),
we need to use
trend
language
. We need to talk about
“increase”,
“decrease”.
We could talk about
1990 and 2000
, or we could talk about
January and June
,
or we could talk about
Monday and Friday
. It doesn’t matter.
Note: if they give you a diagram with
just one year
, all we can do is just to
compare
, we
cannot use trend language
“increase”, “decrease”,
“fluctuated”.
In other words, we
cannot talk about movement.
On the other hand, if they give you
two years, three years, or four years
,
they
still want
comparison
,
but now they also want
trend language
. They also
want you to talk about movement. These are really two basic groups of
language that you need to use to describe diagrams:
comparison
and
trend
language
.
Let’s build some vocabulary. Here is
a list of verbs, adverbs, adjectives and
nouns
that you need to use in task 1 writing.
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Note that
“plunge”
and
“plummet”
do not take adverbs
because what they
mean is
a big decrease
.
We can say
“decreased
considerably/sharply/dramatically/significantly/substantially” or
“plunged”,
or
“plummeted”.
But, we
must not say,
“plummeted
considerably/sharply/dramatically/significantly/substantially
”
or
“plunged
considerably/sharply/dramatically/significantly/substantially
”
No need to use those two verbs
“plunge” and
“plummet”
with an adverb
.
Decreased sharply equals
plummeted. They mean the same thing.
Likewise,
“rocket”
does not take adverbs
. So to say
increased significantly,
rose sharply, they mean the same thing as
rocketed
. A big/sharp increase, so
no adverbs
for
rocketed
.
There are some things I need you to be aware of here. I want you to know
that
steadily
and
gradually
mean the same thing.
Slightly
is something means
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different.
Steadily
and
gradually
mean over a period of time
.
Slightly
means
how much deals with amount.
Steadily
and
gradually
mean a gradual change
like a child growth; he or she grows gradually/ he or she grows over time.
Levelled off
&
stabilized
These are flat changes or no changes really, but I
want you to be aware that
levelled off
and
stabilized
always happen after another trend
. You can say,
for example,
“the figure remained the same before increasing/ the figure
remained stable before increasing/ the figure remained unchanged before
increasing/ the figure remained constant before increasing”. However, we
cannot use
“stabilized
or
levelled off”
in this case.
Stabilized
and
levelled off
always happen after another trend
. For example,
sales fluctuated before they
levelled off/ sales fluctuated before they stabilized.
Don’t ever use
stabilized
and
levelled off
to start your description.
Fluctuation
You can say
fluctuated significantly/ fluctuated wildly
(big changes)
or
fluctuated slightly
(small changes)
.
The birthday fluctuated significantly/wildly between 2000 and 2005.
Reached a low
“Reach”
always happen after a movement
.
“A high”
is always behind a point
of the diagram
. We
shouldn’t say
reached a high
, instead we say
started at a
high/ began at a high
.
We can say
reached a low/started at a low/ began at a low
Car sales reached a low of 15.000 in 2000.
Reached a peak
“A peak”
is always up and down
. A peak can be a high but it doesn’t have to
be. For example,
reached two peaks before reaching a high.
The number of people who were unemployed reached a peak of 2000 people
in 2015.
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The number of tourists reached a peak of 15 million in 1995.
Stood at
You can use
“stood at”
at anywhere on the graph
you want
(at the beginning
it stood at, afterward it stood at, then it stood at”, then it stood at, then it
stood at something else).
“Stood at”
works for anything on the graph.
The number of sales stood at 4 million in 2010.
The number of people travelling to London stood at 26 million in 2005.
Started at/ began at
You can use
“started at/ began at”
at the beginning.
In 2000, the figure for Internet users started at approximately 50 million.
The amount of meat consumed weekly began at about 150 grams.
Ended at/ finished at
You can use
“ended at/ finished at”
at the end.
The figure finished at over 50%.
Dipped/decreased
slightly
Expenditure on furniture dipped slightly from 9% to 7% between 2002 and
2005.
Coffee sales decreased slightly between June and August.
Examples:
Coffee sales
began at
50 thousand dollars, then
decreased slightly
to 48
thousand dollars. Subsequently, sales
plunged
and
reached a low of
40
thousand dollars between June and August. Afterwards, coffee sales
rocketed
to a high of
70 thousand dollars. Sales
remained stable
before decreasing
and stabilizing at…
Started at a high
…then it
fell slightly/declined slightly/ dropped slightly/ fell
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steadily/declined gradually
…then it
levelled off/ stabilized/ remained
unchanged/ remained stable/ remained the same/ maintained the same figure
.
Sales
soared/rocketed/rose dramatically/grew sharply/increased
substantially
.
“Soared”
really is the same as
“rocketed”.
Increased
slightly
/increased
gradually
.
The number of people using the Internet increased slightly between 1995 and
2005.
From 2002 to 2004, CD sales in the UK increased gradually from 3 to 4
million - a rise of 30%.
Experienced/witnessed/saw
a decrease/a decline/a rise/an increase
Laptop prices experienced a decrease/a decline.
Laptop prices underwent a decrease/a decline.
The price of laptop saw a fall/decrease/a decline.
The price of laptop witnessed a fall/decrease/a decline.
As far as I know, this method allows you to
have a variety while maintaining
accuracy and limiting what you need to learn
. I don’t need you to learn
everything. I just need to learn these things. These are simple structures,
because there are
no time
, and
no figure
. There are
no adjectives or adverbs
here. These are very simple. Let’s look at these again:
The purchase of Honda increased slightly from…..to….
Honda sales grew slightly from nearly…to…..
Honda sales decreased substantially, falling from…to…
Sales of Yamaha rocketed.
Sales of Yamaha soared.
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