Ielts writing Task 1 + 2

3. What are the main points? 
The main points are the most important
features 
(the most important trends, some general comparisons and some
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general superlatives)
.
I should have an idea about what the whole diagram looks like – they’re on
your main points, and when it comes to the main points, I would say
“overall, the number of visitors from all five countries increased, meanwhile
the US and the UK accounted for the most tourists throughout the period”
2
sentences
. Now, what I just gave you is going to give you a 7.0+ on the task
achievement. You need to give me 
general trends 
and 
some superlatives
.
You need to have a general idea of trends and comparisons in your main
points.
4. The next thing you should be doing here is you need to organize your
paragraphs
I’ll tell you to do 3 paragraphs here: your 
introduction
, your 
overview
, and 
2
body paragraphs
.
Your introduction 
should be 
a paraphrased summary.
Your overview 
should be 
the main points 
that have 
trends 
and some
comparisons
.
You can use 
some expressions for your overview 
as below:
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The graph shows (information about) /indicates /illustrates /highlight (the
data about)…
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As the graph shows
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It is clear from the graph (that)
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As is shown by the graph
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It can be seen from the graph (that)
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As can be clearly seen from the graph,
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From the graph, it is clear (that)
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As is illustrated by the graph,
You will get marks on your main points. If you don’t include any main points
in your overview paragraph even though your grammar and vocabulary are
perfect, you are not going to get higher than a 5.0 in task achievement
because there is no clear overview. If you want to get a 
7.0+ 
in task
achievement, 
you need to 
add the main points 
that 
have trends 
and 
some
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comparisons
.
Your body paragraphs need to be organized logically
. For example, if we
have 5 countries to look at. We may organize the body paragraphs by their
figures (3 countries have the highest figures, we will describe them in one
paragraph, and with the smallest figures, we will describe them in the other
paragraph)