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three types of ailments in the US, England, Germany, and Spain in
1990.
(The “table ” is introduced; the verb “
indicate
” is specifically used to
describe tables; the topic is paraphrased.)

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2) Overview
Overall, cardiovascular diseases affected the highest number of people
in all countries, whereas diabetes was held accountable for the lowest
number of cases of poor health conditions.
(The signal word “overall ” is used; the two main features of the table, “the
highest and the lowest figures, ” are compared in a general way without
mentioning details.)
3) Body paragraph 1
Regarding the given statistics, cardiovascular diseases affected most of
the population in England, Germany, and Spain with 6.6, 6.3, and 5.9
million people, respectively. However, this figure had a noticeable
reduction to 4.6 million Americans. In contrast, diabetes affected the
lowest number of individuals in all these countries. The figure had a
significant drop to 2.2 million for the US. In comparison, it was raised
minimally for Spain, reaching the second-lowest number of diabetic
patients with 2.3 million.
(Note that although it is difficult to see the tables’ trends, it is still essential
to use academic vocabulary and phrases to describe changes. However,
there is no need to describe every piece of detailed information. In this
paragraph, comparison and contrast are both used to describe data for the
highest and the lowest numbers. Some details and specific phrases have
helped draw a clear picture of the trends.)
4) Body paragraph 2
Obesity came second for most countries except for the US, where the
number of obese people reached a peak of 7.1 million. On the other