The easy way to ielts writing academic Module

This sample writing is entitled to a high band score as it has
excellent coherence (fluency, organization of data, and
paragraphing) and cohesion (logical development of the
paragraphs and seamless use of linking devices). Specific
vocabulary and phrases are highlighted in various comparative
sentence structures flexibly and accurately. 
(Comparative
language and structures are underlined in this sample writing.)
Combination #2
The bar chart shows the amount of leisure time different age groups in
England had, and the line graph shows several types of pastime activities
with a projection for the future.
Summarize the information by reporting the main features and making
comparisons where relevant.

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Explanatory sample writing
1) Introduction
The bar chart provides information about hours of free time that two
age groups spent in England from 2000 to 2015, while the line graph
compares different types of leisure activities over the same period with
a projection of the year 2030.
(The paragraph has introduced the bar chart and the line graph, and similar
words and synonyms have paraphrased the topic to avoid repetition.)
2) Overview
Overall, the amount of free time had a reduction for both age groups
regardless of some fluctuations. On the other hand, different types of
activities are likely to experience a rise by 2030.
(The signal word, “overall, ” has initiated the paragraph; the bar chart’s
main features are compared. It also offers a prediction about the line graph.)
3) Body paragraph 1
According to the bar chart, the amount of free time fluctuated wildly
for both categories.10-15-year-olds spent over 4 hours on daily leisure