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activities in 2000, while this figure noticeably declined to almost 2.5
hours for 15-25-year-olds. In contrast, the older age group was entitled
to the highest amount of free time with 4.5 hours a day in 2010 in
contrast to nearly half that of the younger age group, who experienced
another increase to 3.5 hours of free time in 2015. On the other hand,
the figure hit the trough at under 2 hours simultaneously for the older
age group.
(There is a detailed comparison between the trends provided in the bar
chart.)

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4) Body paragraph 2
Based on the line graph, working out accounted for a higher
percentage compared with watching TV. Just above 4% and 6% of the
population preferred watching TV and working out respectively in
2000. Both trends dropped drastically in 2010; however, they recovered
quickly. Working out is predicted to reach a peak of around 10% by
2030. In contrast, watching TV is likely to grow slowly to reach the
same level as in 2000.
(The trends in the line graph are precisely compared using various
comparative structures. Details and specific vocabulary and phrases are
accurately practiced. There is a smooth transition into neutral future tenses
(…is predicted to/…is likely to ). Some details for 2010 are skipped, which
is quite acceptable as providing fully detailed descriptions is not highly
advised concerning time management.)
Sample writing
The bar chart provides information about hours of free time that two age
groups spent in England from 2000 to 2015, while the line graph compares
different types of leisure activities over the same period with a projection of
the year 2030.
Overall , the amount of free time had a reduction for both age groups
regardless of some fluctuations. On the other hand, different types of
activities are likely to experience a rise by 2030.
According to the bar chart , the amount of free time fluctuated wildly for
both categories.10-15-year-olds spent over 4 hours on daily leisure
activities in 2000, while this figure noticeably declined to almost 2.5 hours
for 15-25-year-olds. In contrast, the older age group was entitled to the
highest amount of free time with 4.5 hours a day in 2010 in contrast to
nearly half that of the younger age group, who experienced another increase
to 3.5 hours of free time in 2015. On the other hand, the figure hit the
trough at under 2 hours simultaneously for the older age group.
Based on the line graph , working out accounted for a higher percentage
compared with watching TV. Just above 4% and 6% of the population
preferred watching TV and working out respectively in 2000. Both trends
dropped drastically in 2010; however, they recovered quickly . Working out

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is predicted to reach a peak of around 10% by 2030. In contrast, watching
TV is likely to grow slowly to reach the same level as in 2000.
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