Explanatory sample writing
1) Introduction
The map illustrates the structure of a city, where two proposals, A1 and
A2, are considered for the construction of a school.
(The map is introduced using the verb “illustrate .” Similar words and
synonyms have successfully paraphrased the topic.)
2) Overview
Overall, A1 and A2 are situated in the vicinity of the residential area
and the city center. A1 is in the southwest of the city, and A2 is placed
in the northern regions. Both locations are far from the park in the east
and the business district in the south.
(The paragraph is
started with the signal word, “overall .” There are two
general statements about the two locations and
their positions concerning
other regions on the map.)
3) Body paragraph 1
A1, which is roughly situated in the southwest of the city, is accessible
to the city center through a railway, which crosses a river just before it
enters the city center. This river runs through the city from north to
south. A1 is also adjacent to a housing state in the northwest; however,
there is no direct road to this area from A1. The city center is linked to
a park, which is in the eastern regions.
(The paragraph focuses on A1; there is a detailed description of the location
regarding its surrounding area. A few “non-defining relative clauses ” are
used for better cohesion. Both passive
and active voice are practiced;
prepositions of location precisely describe different areas.)
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