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Essay Practice 
Some people believe women and men should not have exactly the same rights since 
they are different in many ways. What’s your opinion? Support your answer with 
specific details. 

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8- Many people believe that violence on Television will ultimately result 
in more violence among the youth. 
Do you agree with this opinion? Why?
What has our society come to these days? Everywhere we look, violence is 
present; on the streets, back alleys, schools, and even at home. Even if one 
might be a pacifist, violence will seep its way into our homes through the 
television. Some children that see violence on television are pulled into its 
harmful deceptions of problem solving and choose violent solutions to their 
problems.
Scientists have tried to explain why children are so amused by a big glowing 
box and the action that takes place within it. Research shows that television is 
a major source of violence for children. This research shows us that violence 
appeals to every audience, including children. The effects have been seen in
a number of cases. It must be pointed out that most children who commit a 
crime are claimed to have seen a similar act on television. Even though we
should not hold television directly responsible for these acts, we need to admit
that it is television that plants a violent seed in the minds of these children. 
Furthermore, some psychologists and psychiatrists feel that continued 
exposure to such violence might unnaturally speed up the impact of the adult 
world on the child. This can force the child into a kind of prematurity. As the 
child matures into an adult, he can become bewildered, have a greater 
distrust towards others, a superficial approach to adult problems, and even an 
unwillingness to become an adult.
In conclusion, violence on television proves to be a root of violence among the 
young people. There are many examples and proven research that shows 
how violence viewed on television takes root all over our country. Only when 
we decide to put an end to this problem as an individual will we begin to see a 
more peaceful world. 
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